Tuesday, January 11, 2011
A Perfect Stranger
I stand here ...
with my head completely resounding somewhere else
and deeper pleasure is to go find my self ...
but there comes a situation
when you urge to sleep and you cant
and sky above the ground, makes you go upside down
for life nasty play and fierce things ahead
did you ever think of what you have left behind
did you ever think where some faces go confine
You are here today,
and time hits me through spine
is the pain i suffer ..
is the protest of a crime
is famine within the trough
where the body seeps the tuff
still comes in a guff
Listen ...
Life plays the trick
and events a testimony of our own self...
when you feel life within the lows and all above is the vacant space
below is the cracked world and around is an unknown pace
and only wish is to look back, after noise settles down
to find the twined answer and seeing you more pat down
i still fear the odd but peace that i found.
is to believe that you are here, is the hope that confound.
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Gud Work..i loved't..
ReplyDeleteu're welcum to my profile:)
http://ayushi-milestones.blogspot.com/
thanks a lot aayushi for taking out time and giving it a read, i hope to see you again and guess what i am already there ;)
ReplyDeletesimple but meaningful
ReplyDeletei wouldn't look back if i were you... but yes i'd look back to learn from a bad past experience.. i'd use it to make me wiser, and if something gets me low, the fact that i went through all that and survived is enough to make my day and keep me going
ReplyDeletei liked this piece... so intense and so from the heart!!! <3
keep writing!! :)
Humaira.. i simply Loved it (Y) Keep writing :)
ReplyDeletethanks alot mehreen, we look back to see how many faces we know, some one who is urs when every one else is a perfect stranger.
ReplyDelete@ mehroo : thanks alot for giving it a read =)
stupendous! loved it =)
ReplyDeleteNice post, liked it :) xx
ReplyDeleteHey Humaira!
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The Stylish Blogger Award:
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You know wat Humaira..sumtyms..its just gud to move on without looking back..don't worry about the ppl in your past..theres a reason why they din make't to ur present..life may hv sumthng btr in score for you..
ReplyDeletethankyou aayushi=) you are fairly rite =)
ReplyDeletethanks zeeshan for liking it.
ReplyDeletethankyou iqra