Thursday, April 28, 2011

Wish You Were Here



Like a very fine ray, where sun basks the day
In the hindsight! you arrive as a peace-giver

But all my assessments drowned in the river
this is how much i care about you

If you ask me i can dive down into the memory lane
And bring one most powerful, most fine year

Just to show you that this one year
When i felt that nothing more than you, is my need to bear

And today when you are away
Is the thousands miles i cover in a day

And these strange happenings have tied their knots wickedly
Sulking in the temple,doomed to see colors fading away vividly

Come from the certain side of the mirror
To see if i am real, if i can break the wind storm or burn the hashes of fear

But now, when you come to breach the rules of uncertainty
Don't come as a weather,come as infinity

The color of your soul and this strange intimation
This is how much i miss you and your felicitation.

17 comments:

  1. A Wondering WondererApril 28, 2011 at 9:41 AM

    I must say....

    You were able to SOFTLY express yearning, the depth that this poem reflects adds to its blue-ish notion....

    By the way, you like the phrase 'memory lane', you use it a little too often :)

    A Wondering Wonderer; site was having problem logging me so was not able to post the comment with my ID.

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  2. errrr.... really? OOoops =D so thankyou :$

    thanks for the read really...

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  3. Zeeshan thanks a lot for being a regular reader =)

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  4. But now, when you come to breach the rules of uncertainty
    Don't come as a weather,come as infinity ...

    Nice One!

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  5. This one is my favorite line as well

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  6. "If you ask me i can dive down into the memory lane
    And bring one most powerful, most fine year "

    <3 it!!!

    i really like this one!

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  7. beautiful piece humaira..m so sorry i could nt follow u fr a long while..bt now i will..

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  8. thankyou mehreen for <3- ing it. hehe. take care

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  9. Thankyou aayushi... when i am in this blogging world; i think about few of my friends here and you are one of them.
    take care =)

    And i do hope you are doing well and buying new clothes and making shopkeeper go cuckoo ;)...

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  10. thankyou majworld....=)

    I just had a look at your blog.Imust say it is aptly organized.

    have a good life... thanks for visiting.

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  11. Come from the certain side of the mirror..
    To see if i am real, if i can break the wind storm or burn the hashes of fear
    Loved this piece of yours :) x

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  12. thanks tehreem for bucking me up =) take care. Do come again.

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